Some health experts claim that consuming too much caffeine could put people’s health at risk and that people should not drink energy drinks too often. In particular, for those who are underage, the impact can be more serious than for adults because their body is not fully developed. Furthermore, another issue is whether those young people are able to control themselves so that they can avoid becoming addicted to those drinks. Energy drinks should be recognized as things that may have health risks and therefore should be consumed in moderation, just like alcohol or cigarettes. This responsibility is too much for young people to handle, and that is why I think there should be an age restriction to buy them. 指導案3-2. Useful Expressions for Good Logichave energy drinks. What do some health experts claim about it? That’s right. Some health experts say that drinking energy drinks too much can be bad for our health. In the third sentence, you show that consuming too much caffeine can be dangerous. Like the second and third sentences, when you try to express your opinion, you need to analytically explain “what is the problem” as the first step, and then organize assumptions that are based on your argument. After you have finished organizing them, you should write reasons the prompt asks you to show. In this paragraph, what reasons are given in response to the prompt? Excellent. In the paragraph, the prompt is about whether there should be an age restriction to buy energy drinks. So, the reasons need to be related to “age” factors like something written in the fourth and fifth sentences. Last, the third tip is that you should write a conclusion at the end of a paragraph in order to emphasize your opinion. In the sixth sentence, you wrote what you thought about after this prompt. What is it? Right. You thought that people should consume energy drinks in moderation. Then, in the seventh sentence, you drew your conclusion. What is it? Very good. In the seventh sentence, you summarized the whole passage by concluding that there should be an age restriction to buy energy drinks. 35留留意意点点■教科書の前見返しに掲載の「つなぎ言葉」や「論理的な文章を書くための表現集」を参照させながら，パラグラフを書くのに役立つ表現を確認する。■類似表現を紹介してもよい。
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