W ①,■■ riteワークシート■Tip! ・２つの文をまとめてつながりを強くすると？（原因と結果をカンマを使ってつなげると？）[Model Paragraph B]評価B12) Fill in the blanks to make a better connection between sentences by referring to the “Tips for Improvement” Tips for Improvement□ 反対意見に配慮しつつ意見を述べると？（①元のHoweverの内容を詳しく説明すると？）□ 内容を明確にするために情報を補足すると？（②natural substancesとは具体的には？）□ 本論からの考察を導きながら結びにつなげると？（③留意点を示しつつ，添加物が必要な理由をまとめるEven better!Try to improve the quality of language and logical connections by combining and/or restructuring sentences and adding and/or replacing expressions.described below.There are some people who worry that consuming foodadditives might harm their health.I don’t think people necessarily have to avoid all food additives. With regard to the safety of food additives, there are multiple aspects to be considered. One of them is their sources. People tend to think that all food additives are artificial, but some of them are made from natural substances ②and they are not so different from vegetables or other ingredients. Another important aspect is their benefits.A Food additives help preserve food or enhance its flavor. Thanks to them, we can have many food choices. ③Considering the aspects above, I disagree with the opinion that all food additives should be avoided.AFood additives help preserve food or enhance its flavor. Thanks to them, we can have many food choices. 19と？）→■■・より正確に表現すると？（数が多いだけ？ 多様であることを示すと？）
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