□ 文と文の間に飛躍している箇所がない□ 読み手への説明が不足している箇所がない□ 全体の主旨から逸脱している箇所がないStep 3 DraftingWrite a paragraph by combining the sentences in Step 2.Step 4 ImprovingImprove your draft after working on Model Paragraph A and B.[Model Paragraph A]1) Read the hints in Japanese and write some sentences to complete the paragraph below.However, I don’t think people necessarily have to avoid all food additives. With regard to the safety of food additives, ② . One of them is their sources. People tend to think that all food additives are artificial, but some of them are made from natural substances. Another important aspect is their benefits. Food additives help preserve food or enhance its flavor. Thanks to them, we can have many food choices. Considering the aspects above, I disagree with the opinion that all food additives should be avoided.評価A2+18①意見を述べる前提として，添加物の健康被害を心配する人がいることを述べよう この後に続く理由の根拠として，添加物の安全性についてはさまざまな側面があることを述べよう
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